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PostSubject: imperfect reflection   Sat Apr 28, 2012 1:54 am

okay so most of my poems are inspired pieces, I just wanted to share this new one with you all. I hope that's ok!


Imperfect Reflection

A silver tide of moonlight glides across the surface
Leaving a sheen trailing within its wake
And just as the stars are caught reflecting
In the mirrored perfection that is captured as the lake.

A woman kneels beside the edge dipping her fingertips in
She’s watching the shoal of fish jump within
And as the golden planet of Venus shines above
As the lake is engulfed in a feeling of love
The woman stares at her reflection down below,
While the faeries dance about on the lily pads
And the fireflies with their little lights that glow.
While the animals around come and go.

The woman sighs as the magic subsides
And in the reflection, she’s terrified
There’s feelings of sadness in her eyes
A sense of vulnerability that has defied
The imperfections that were seen as lies
They are now perfections not to hide.

The silver tide of moonlight clears the slate
And now the fear’s gone, it’s not too late
The old imperfection of herself has died
Gone with the dishonesty and the deception
Maybe someday she’ll find a better reception

The silver waves recede across the golden shore
And it leaves her yearning for perfection and more
Though a new beginning has been made today
As soon as this night has begun to fade
She watches the rise of the morning sun
And knows in her heart that it’s all been done.

The imperfections that were her flaws are
No longer imperfections anymore
The moonlight glides across the lake
Leaving a silvery beam trailing along
within its wake.
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PostSubject: Re: imperfect reflection   Sun Apr 29, 2012 1:17 am

Thankyou for sharing this great piece of work Majestic. Angelslove x


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PostSubject: Imperfect Reflection    Sun Apr 29, 2012 5:57 am

Oh what a beautiful poem MajesticMoonstone thankyou for sharing with us xxxxxxxx flower
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PostSubject: Re: imperfect reflection   Sun Apr 29, 2012 7:34 am

Lovely words Moony thank you so much for sharing them with us look forward to reading more of your writings
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PostSubject: Re: imperfect reflection   Tue May 01, 2012 12:16 am

thanks folks, I will post more of them when more write themselves. Smile
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